Conrad Rice

This is interesting. I'm going to go ahead and just critique this as it is, rather than as part of a novel, because in a novel chapters ought to be ...

Be harsh, won't you please?

Suzanne, wiseman, J, finished all of yours, no problems. Any other unfortunate souls?

Okay, this is going somewhere. Where that somewhere is, I'm not exactly sure. But I'll give this my best shot. There is one thing that I see sticking out in ...

Well, that was interesting, to say the least. You do have a thing for sad endings, J, I'll give you that. I don't know why you said once that you ...

Well, this was a good story. Not my cup of tea, but I know when something's good and it's still not my personal preference. I won't go after grammar, cause ...

this one's real old real short there's a connection to an earlier story in this one, will you see it? You brought this upon yourself, don't you know.

With the novel I'm working on I've done some planning. I know what the characters are and the general direction of things. Anything more and I feel like I'm spending ...

This is a good story so far. It could do with a bit of expounding though. You go right from the main character walking in the woods to her seeing ...

Cheryl sat on the couch, the worn and ancient book open before her. Her hands trembled as she turned the pages, searching for one certain phrase. It was a thing ...

Thought I'd try to generate a little round table discussion. So, the question is, what do you have trouble writing? What I mean by this is, do you have a ...

Ah, the final piece. I should tell you I've really enjoyed reading all of these. It is a very vibrant world you have painted here. If you return to it ...

If you have a lot of subplots and things of that nature, but no main plot, you might consider doing a bunch of short stories. Or just making one particular ...

First, I'll say that a setting ought not to come first when writing a story. The idea of plot is a little deceptive too. Some people spend so much time ...

Daniel walked up the lighted path towards the front door. ‘It’s a beautiful night,’ he thought to himself. Then again, prom night was supposed to be beautiful, was it not? ...